September 7, 2021
Back at it
August 22, 2021
What's it like to be edited?
After the first draft of my book was completed in late July, it has been in the hands (that is, the computer) of a skilled editor. Lil is a developmental editor. When we first met on a Zoom call some time back, she said, "Write the book you need to write, but there's no assurance that a publisher will want it. That's where I come in."
The past few weeks have been slow going. Every two or three days, she e-mails a chapter back to me. It's marked up. Sentences are deleted. Paragraphs are shortened. Poems are trimmed. And the right column is filled with questions and comments:
"Are you sure about this?"
"Whoa, that was an abrupt transition."
And my favorite: "Red Alert! Red Alert! Sounds like a sermon!"
I've published some books in the past, but they have never been edited. Well, let me correct that: one editor inserted the word "Amen" at the end of every chapter. I begged to have it removed when I saw the author's proofs, but I was ignored. Now I simply assume that she agreed with what I wrote.
In the sanctuary, nobody stands up after I preach a sermon to say, "Hey, that third paragraph was two sentences too long." No, I enjoy a captive audience. Or so I tell myself. They slip out to the restroom whenever they want. And over the years, a couple of folks have not come back.
Whatever. When you are a preacher, it comes with the territory.
Likewise, if the crowd doesn't like the piano solo, they simply don't applaud. I have gotten used to that. Sometimes I have convinced myself that my improvisation was just too subtle or stunning to get a response. More often, it means the sound engineer fell asleep or went out for a smoke. Or perhaps I played something that simply didn't matter.
In the recording studio, it's a different situation. The band is putting something down for posterity. It will be heard again, and again, and again. (I know, that's a vain dream too...) When a tune is recorded for permanence, we want to make sure it sparkles. Otherwise, why bother? Landfills are full of the remnants of mediocrity.
So, all praise for Lil. She is working hard to make sure that my hard work gets a hearing reading. She is tough and demanding. And she is good. Together we are collaborating to improve what I've written and to make it as accessible as possible.
I am swallowing my pride. Or ego. Or false assumptions.
It's a good lesson.
August 17, 2021
Mean What You Say
"Mean What You Say" is a tune composed by Thad Jones, one of the great composer-arrangers of this music. The title of the song is an invitation to integrity and integration, two values that mean a great deal to me.
Integrity seems to be a rare quality these days. We don't see enough of it in public life. For me it comes down to two integrating questions for this summer sabbatical:
- How can I write about jazz from a distance, unless I'm making music?
- How could I write about the spiritual life, unless I live it?
One of the great gifts of this summer sabbatical is a renewed opportunity to play music with friends. After a long pandemic shutdown, it feels good to make some melodies. I have enjoyed playing for a theater fundraiser in upstate New York, two gigs for the Scranton Jazz Festival, and a gala concert organized by saxophonist Al Hamme.
We can set up and play anywhere. The photo above was take by our friend Nick in a wonderful Italian restaurant in Scranton that specializes in wood-fired pizza.Nick stopped back the next night to catch me me with a second trio as we played in a great coffee shop downtown. If you have Facebook, you can click and enjoy a clip of the trio in full flight. The highlight of that second night was when Mark Woodyatt stopped in with his magic violin and joined us for a couple of Chick Corea tunes.
In addition to these wonderful gigs, Al Hamme put together a great octet for a concert in my old stomping ground in New York. He never ceases to amaze me! The musicianship was impeccable. The jazz was swinging. Of course, Al make certain that we had new shirts to look sharp.
As expected - especially since the concert was cooked up by Al - the evening event sold out.
August 15, 2021
Little Cabin in the Hills
My editor has been working through the chapters for readability and clarity. She is brilliant. Her suggestions are vastly improving the manuscript, and I hope to have a good bit of the revisions done before I head home. It is going well.
The cottage is comfortable. Jamie came up for the weekend and liked it very much. She brought Mexican take-out from a favorite restaurant and we had a feast.
After enjoying a wonderful craft fair in nearby Eagles Mere, we rolled downhill to the thriving metropolis of Forksville (population 145). Some may think the town gets its name from a fork in the Loyalsock Creek. I believe the name comes from the tremendous cheesesteaks available from the local general store, which require forks to finish them off.They are enormous. Tasty, too! And you can consume them next to a covered bridge.
We have been wandering up here annually for the past six years or so. There is a small Presbyterian chapel in need of weekly preachers during the summer, and I've enjoyed bringing a sermon up here. Over the years we have made some friends, and it doesn't feel like the typical guest preacher stint.
It's a peaceful location to do some writing and resting. And even in the middle of some fierce rainfall, you can look out the back window of the cottage and see something beautiful.
August 5, 2021
The Beauty of Ordinary Time
When the Presbyterians revised their worship book a few years ago, they changed the designation of how time was marked. Maybe you didn't know this, but every Sunday of the year is given a title: Third Sunday of Advent, Second Sunday of Easter, and so on. The days when nothing "happened" were once referred to as "ordinary time." That's the phrase that has been eliminated. But I believe it's an excellent description of how much of our days and weeks are spent.
Since the book manuscript was handed off to an editor, I've had a couple of weeks of Ordinary Time. How has it been spent? Mowing the yard. Pulling weeds. Straightening the garage. Visiting my mom. Paying bills. Reading books. A couple of church friends dropped off zucchini and green beans from their garden. I've done a few loads of laundry. You know, ordinary things.
This ordinary week has been a lot of fun. It began with a gig with Mike, Tony, and Joe, playing for a fundraiser in upstate New York. The kids helped my plan a surprise cookout for my wife's birthday. I took daughter Meg to catch a train to Philly on Tuesday, and then returned in time for the rest of us to enjoy a AAA baseball game in nearby Scranton; apparently it was $2 Beer Night. Last evening, we were treated to dinner by our friend Bill for "jazz night" at a country inn in the northern Poconos.No fireworks. No disruptions. No drama.
I remember an article that was printed in The Christian Century sometime before my 2013 sabbatical, entitled "The Art of Puttering." Rodney Clapp described it this way:
Puttering is marked by a gentle, even leisurely rhythm: it involves moving back and forth from one chore to another at a sedate pace. Puttering, unlike multitasking, is not marked by a sense of urgency. Puttering allows for breaks in the work, for a cup of coffee or even a burst of play. (22 March 2013)
Ordinary Time. Nothing wrong with that.
This weekend, I have two jazz gigs at the Scranton Jazz Festival. On Friday, Tony and I play with trombonist Mike Fahn at a pizza shop. On Saturday, it's a trio gig with two young musicians in the alley of a coffee shop. Ah, show biz! Both will be relaxed, simple, and fun. To mark the event, I've picked up a new Hawaiian shirt. If there's time, I will give a field report from the festival, before I head to the woods next week for a two week retreat.
Thanks for keeping up with this blog!
July 29, 2021
Yes, we take requests
Some folks have requested the sermon that I preached in Allentown, PA, which was accompanied by the Presbybop Quartet. I'm mostly taking off the summer from preaching, but this was a sermon about improvisation. Since it draws on some material from the new book, here it is:
-----------------------------------A Dispatch from the Frontier
Acts 8:26-40
First Presbyterian, Allentown PA
July 25, 2021
Then an angel of the Lord said to Philip, ‘Get up and go towards the south to the road that goes down from Jerusalem to Gaza.’ (This is a wilderness road.) So he got up and went. Now there was an Ethiopian eunuch, a court official of the Candace, queen of the Ethiopians, in charge of her entire treasury. He had come to Jerusalem to worship and was returning home; seated in his chariot, he was reading the prophet Isaiah. Then the Spirit said to Philip, ‘Go over to this chariot and join it.’ So Philip ran up to it and heard him reading the prophet Isaiah. He asked, ‘Do you understand what you are reading?’ He replied, ‘How can I, unless someone guides me?’ And he invited Philip to get in and sit beside him. Now the passage of the scripture that he was reading was this:
so he does not open his mouth.
In his humiliation justice was denied him. Who can describe his generation?
For his life is taken away from the earth.’
The eunuch asked Philip, ‘About whom, may I ask you, does the prophet say this, about himself or about someone else?’ Then Philip began to speak, and starting with this scripture, he proclaimed to him the good news about Jesus. As they were going along the road, they came to some water; and the eunuch said, ‘Look, here is water! What is to prevent me from being baptized?’ He commanded the chariot to stop, and both of them, Philip and the eunuch, went down into the water, and Philip baptized him. When they came up out of the water, the Spirit of the Lord snatched Philip away; the eunuch saw him no more, and went on his way rejoicing. But Philip found himself at Azotus, and as he was passing through the region, he proclaimed the good news to all the towns until he came to Caesarea.
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The story is told of a young male minister who went to Haiti on a mission trip. Midweek, the team split up. Four members of the group were sent to stay with a family in a small settlement, off the beaten path. There were four of them – three women and the minister. The hostess showed them to a single bedroom with two small beds. The minister smiled, looked at the three of them, said, “I hope you get along.”
Oh no. The group had to improvise. I will not tell you how they solved those sleeping arrangements, even if that distracts you for the rest of the day. All I will say is when you are on the frontier, you cannot rely on easy answers and settled procedures. But you must do something.
Today we hear a Frontier Text from the Book of Acts. We can locate it far from the Settlements of Organized Religion. This is a text that lies beyond the safe regulations of the Presbyterian Book of Order. It happens on the frontier. One of the apostles must improvise.
Philip draws near a chariot, somewhere on the road between Jerusalem and Gaza. It is not settled land. Luke, the storyteller, describes it as “wilderness.” That means it is desert land, desolate land, a place with little vegetation. Resources are limited. The challenges are great.
“Wilderness” is a good description of where we are, not just as we keep moving into a post-Covid environment. All of us, particularly Christian people in this country, had begun to locate ourselves in the wilderness as numbers were dropping off, congregations were again, and the Show Biz church was snatching some of our people away.
The old certainties don’t have the same juice. The former assumptions do not hold. Those who are indifferent will not come back. The indecisive have already made their decision. If we were playing it safe before, we now know that safety won’t be sufficient. If we were coasting in any way, now we could be in danger of going adrift. So the situation is ripe for improvisation.
This makes some folks nervous. They express their anxiety in words of judgment, even dismissal. Like Homer Simpson, who once declared, “You jazz guys are just making things up.”
Well, there’s more to it than that. Improvisation functions on some assumptions. The first is that it doesn’t come from nowhere. Improvisation comes from somewhere.
For instance, I can set the tempo. Describe the situation (“Let’s play a blues in F.”) And then we turn it loose… (Band plays)
What just happened? The musicians were drawing from their experience. They were not picking notes out of thin air. No, they dig the music out of rich soil. There is a difference. Paul Berliner is an ethnomusicologist. He wrote an 800-page treatise on how jazz is made. He discovered the musicians draw on what they already know about harmony, rhythm, musical form, the construction of melodies, and the tradition that precedes what they are playing.
Consider Philip in wilderness. Who is he? He is not one of the original Twelve. No, according to Acts, chapter 6, this is a second Philip. He is one of the first deacons in the church, one of the Greek-speaking Seven. That means he was a Jew who spoke Greek. According to the story, he was just up preaching in Samaria. Samaria! So he is accustomed to flexibility. Imagine that: a church person who is flexible!
When you step onto the frontier, you take your traditions with you. They have shaped you. They have formed who you are. You cannot help but carry that tradition.
Philip, the Jew, believed that Jesus was the Messiah. He heard the echo of Jesus saying, “Be my witness in Samaria,” so he went. And Jesus said, “Take my witness to the ends of the earth,” so now Philip is on a desert road, talking with an Ethiopian.
That leads to a second condition for improvisation: pay attention to where you are. Pay attention to the circumstances. Tune into what’s happening around you. Listen deeply, so when the moment comes, you can participate in the conversation.
Maybe the jazzers can show us what that looks like. Let’s take an F blues again, and I will ask one of you to create a phrase that the others respond to. (Musicians play again.) They have never played this before, yet drawing on their experiences, they create as they listen to one another.
The nature of this kind of music is dialogue. There is a conversation going on. Not speech-making, not posturing, not defending a well-oiled position – but dialogue. It’s a mutual conversation.
Philip runs up to the chariot. He hears the Ethiopian, who is wealthy enough to command a chariot, and this Ethiopian is reading from the prophet Isaiah. So he’s wealthy enough to possess to a set of Biblical scrolls, which were rare in that time. In an age of widespread illiteracy, this Eunuch also knows how to read. Philip pays attention to all of this, and says, “Do you know what you are reading?”
That’s a good question. Who can understand Isaiah? The Ethiopian doesn’t. He’s confused. Who can blame him? A lot of people get confused when they read the prophet Isaiah. There are no quotation marks in the original Hebrew text. Indentations happen in the wrong places. You can’t tell who’s speaking or what they are talking about. But the Ethiopian, reading from the Hebrew text, believes he has found some good stuff. He has a finger on a section where the prophet speaks of a servant who suffers, like “a lamb led to the slaughter, as one who has been denied justice.”
And he wants to know, “Who is the prophet talking about? Himself? Somebody else?” Perhaps even an Ethiopian eunuch? Philip, paying careful attention, says, “I know who that is,” and he tells him about Jesus. Jesus is the servant who suffers, he was led like a lamb to the slaughter, he was denied justice, and by his wounds we are healed.
Please note: Philip does not pull that out of thin air. He has been shaped by the scripture. He has been shaped by the living tradition of Jesus. He does not throw a bunch of Bible verses like spaghetti on the wall, hoping something will stick. No, he reaches for the right word, the appropriate word, the living word. It’s the word that fits that particular conversation. Most of all, it is the word that opens up to the future.
This is the third assumption about improvisation. It is rooted in our experiences. It is specific to our circumstances. And we faithfully presume there will be a future. Jazz surges forward – it has a future. Did you notice? When the musicians played, they went on longer. They dug in a little bit more. Why? Because when you are engaged in a conversation together, things open up and surge forward.
That’s how it is in music. That’s how it is in faith. Beneath it all is one of the primary assumptions of everybody who improvises. Ready for this? Can you write this down? There must be more.
I had to explain this to my grandmother. She came to hear our band play. After the concert, she drew near to express her appreciation. Standing beside the piano, she picked up a single page of sheet music and asked, “How did you play from this for seven minutes?”
I replied, “Grandma, they ask the same question when I’m home in the pulpit. I read a few Bible verses and go on for eighteen more minutes.” There must be more.
Tradition is healthy; that’s where we come from. The present circumstances are what they are: that’s where we dwell. As we consider the future, there is one adjective greater than all others: pregnant. Even the Ethiopian eunuch who cannot father a child has a future. At least that’s what improvisation says. There must be more.
But look around, you say. We are in the desert. It appears to be a dead place. Nothing seems to be growing here. And I say unto you, “Look again.” Philip and the Ethiopian see a pool of water. In the desert. It’s not supposed to be there, but there it is. Where did it come from? Well, if you know the prophet Isaiah, you remember what he said, back in Scroll #35:
For waters shall break forth in the wilderness, and streams in the desert;
The burning sand shall become a pool, and the thirsty ground springs of water. (35:6-7)
There’s the water. Previously hidden, but now available. The desert is not as desolate as we thought. There are resources around us that we did not expect. There are gifts we would never have discovered if we had not stepped forward and take the risk.
That, of course, is the fourth requirement of improvisation, perhaps the hardest to embrace. It is the fourth and greatest invitation of anybody who steps into an uncertain future with the skills of the tradition and a clear view of the circumstances: you have to take some risks. You have to try something that you have never tried before. You must bring everything you have, everything you know, to the opportunity in front of you – and you step with confidence even though you are uncertain.
So let me translate this into the language of the Ethiopian eunuch. Ready? “Philip, what is to prevent me from being baptized?” That’s a really good question. Consider what is at stake.
- Philip, if you play it safe, the only people you would welcome into the church would be Jews, not Ethiopians. If you baptize him, you’ll have some explaining to do back in Jerusalem.
- Philip, if you play it safe, you will not allow a eunuch into the church. After all, don’t you remember the 23rd chapter of Deuteronomy? It forbids eunuchs from stepping into the Jerusalem Temple. What do you mean that they are now welcome in the church? If we have heard Jesus say, “Go into all the world,” maybe the love of Jesus welcomes those whom Deuteronomy still pushes away.
Before you answer, let me tell you what I heard one night at the Deer Head Inn, the jazz club in Delaware Water Gap. I went up to the bar to greet Jim McNeely, a great pianist who once gave me lessons. He asked what I was doing now, so I told him. He smiled, nodded his head, and he said, “Improvisation is an act of faith.” There it is, the final truth.
Call it risk, call it faith, to improvise is to bring what you have to meet the moment that you’re in. Especially when the old certainties no longer work like they once did.
Now, I know this difficult. I don’t know about your church, but most of the churches I know can turn about as quickly as a barge on the Lehigh River. Ever see a barge turn on the Lehigh River? Yes, I know. But here we are now, once again, finding ourselves on the frontier.
So (1) we remember where we come from, and (2) we pay closer attention to where we are now. (3) We stay open to the possibility of a surprising future. Then (4) we step into that future, risking everything and trusting in the mercy of God.
For that is our safety net. Beneath everything we do for the glory of God, there is a safety net of grace under our feet. You can trust that. In fact, I hear it in the words that Philip said finally to the Ethiopian eunuch. These are not words actually written down in your Bible (that was an inadvertent omission), but I know for certain what Philip said.
Know what he said?
He looked the man straight in the eye and said, “If God has said yes, who am I to say no?”[1]
(c) William G. Carter. All rights reserved.
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[1] A line first heard from Fred B. Craddock, in his sermon, “Can I Also Be Included?”
July 27, 2021
Anybody listening?
It's the old question: If a tree falls in the forest and nobody is there to hear it, does it make a sound?
Updated question: If a jazz group plays to an empty room, does it make any noise?
The strangest part of the last year was producing a couple of concerts to be heard by people that could not be seen. One was a performance of "Blue Notes for Lent," seen online by hundreds of people. The only people physically in the venue were the videographer, the audio engineer, a photographer, a student - and my mom (who caught a ride with the photographer, who lives in her town). Jazz musicians frequently play for small crowds and don't need applause to survive, but this was surreal.
No doubt, a YouTube broadcast extended the audience. One of our viewers tuned in from Europe and left a compliment. Others were scattered across the region. No doubt I will never know who most of them are.
If there is no crowd, the musicians are tempted to play only for themselves. If the audience participates actively - clapping, encouraging, hooting and hollering - the musicians are tempted to play for the crowd. There is a continuum between the polarities, of course, and the sweet spot lies somewhere in between. Jazz musicians aspire to create something better than noise - they are opening up a vein and expressing what's going on inside of them. Yet without an audience, the music has no consequence. It will expire as soon as it hits the air.
As I have handed off the book manuscript to an editor, I've started to look down the road to other projects. On Labor Day weekend, the Quintet will assemble at my church to play one of our three annual jazz services. We will feature the music of Dizzy Gillespie, one of the cofounders of bebop, and a popularizer of Latin rhythms.Dizzy was also an extraordinary showman with a tremendous sense of humor. He was able to shift from the cult-like development of bebop, creating music only for hipsters and other insiders, to performing onstage for enormous crowds. Some of the purists trashed him as a sell-out. The assumption was, "If it doesn't thin out the crowd, it's not real art."
Really?
Musicians search for the place where artistic integrity and popular appeal overlap. I know it exists. The trick is finding it. And then hovering there for a while. I'd love to hear your opinions in the space below. When does art (or jazz) reach the masses without getting watered down?
Meanwhile, we had a wonderful family getaway to "Da Shore." There was a full week of sun, sand, and seafood. Lots of laughter, too. Everybody showed up. That was the key. Today I acquired tickets for an upcoming AAA baseball game, and most of the brood will show up for that, too. If a tree falls, or a future NY Yankee swings a timber and hits the ball our of the park, there will be a great noise.
We had some people show up over the weekend in a church in Allentown, as the Presbybop Quartet went back on the road for a second time. On shorter notice than usual, we were invited to make some joyful noise. It's just an hour down the road - although a 9 am set-up time is a challenge for musicians for whom 9:00 comes only once a day. We played well, and the church asked me to preach. I couldn't do that without getting the band involved. It was a lot of fun - for me, for them, and for the crowd.
All of us showed up. There was music. We heard it.
And let me thank you, too, for showing up and reading these blog posts. Distance separates us, but your presence is palpable. I appreciate it.
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